Fiction that explores the monsters and strangers among us.

Friday, October 11, 2013

Three Ways to Settle an Argument

Insults, silence, Olympian detachment – Hildegard Finkbottom had it all. The insults worked well with the Olympian detachment but the silence was deadly. You could ask her late husband, Broinkton Finkbottom about that, but, oh dear, he died. As did that pesky insurance salesman who refused to take his foot out of the front door and ended up disturbing Hidegard’s Olympian detachment. She started with insults, but names like “used car salesman” “dumb jerk” and “politician” proved ineffective. The silence of death worked, and he fit nicely into the garden next to her husband. The flowers that year were the delight of the neighborhood.


Speaking of Olympian detachment, the next great adventure of Jude Nerdworthy, Teenaged Monster Fighter, begins on this blog next week. The title is: No Space for Vampires or They Came From Out There. What happens when a vampire and his victim are kidnapped by a flying saucer? Find out next week. If you are new to the Jude Nerdworthy stories, please click here to read his most recent adventure.

For your immediate reading pleasure, may I suggest my October focus novel Hags? It has the demonology and witchcraft adventure necessary to make your Halloween reading scary without the chainsaws, long bloody knives or hockey goalie masks you see every year at this time. Click on the front cover of Hags on Amazon to read a lengthy chunk of it free. Please click here.

Monday, October 7, 2013

How Fast is the Story Pace?

Do you prefer fiction that starts slowly and gradually speeds up the story pace? Or would you rather read a story paced to rush you through an exciting journey from the first sentence on?

I like to start my stories in the middle of the action. I’ll catch you up on the details later. I bring you into the drama like a person entering a room where a teenage girl is about to pull the trigger on a boy she has a crush on. Why would she do that? Well, you’ll have to wait for me to finish my current Work in Progress (WIP) to find out. You won’t know the answer for sure until you read the third book in this new madcap series.

Some stories need extra time to set up. Alfred Hitchcock was a master of the slow introduction as seen in the movies Psycho and The Birds. But once the story is setup, it takes off at lightning speed. That’s because fantastic journeys are rarely languid. There’s simply too much to maintain a slow pace.

My other novels begin in medias res, which is the fancy way of saying in the middle of the action. Fulfillment opens the Christmas story in an unexpected place. Instead of starting with the Annunciation, it opens with Mary receiving a visit from the demons bent on preventing the birth of Christ. From the first sentence, you know this will be no goody-goody child’s story. It’s the frightening truth of the age old battle between God and his arch nemesis Satan.

Hags, my focus novel this month, opens with a young man who wakes up one night to discover a dead body in the dumpster behind his house. Steel Pennies opens with a teenager who discovers a human skull on the ground. By starting in the middle of the action, the author sets up a fast paced journey that carries you along from start to finish.

Check out Hags for only $.99 this month for your Kindle. It’s a great Halloween read. Please click here.

Novel Quote
“The man hovered about fifty feet above the parking lot behind Micah’s tiny backyard near the row of green dumpsters.”
Hags by Paul R. Lloyd

Thursday, October 3, 2013

Extraordinary Characters

It isn’t enough to make the characters real in speculative fiction. At least some of them have to be fantastic. For example, do you see that tall, thin man sipping black brew here in the coffee shop where you sit now reading this blog post on your tablet? He appears normal enough, doesn’t he? But he is a fairie with beautiful filigree wings hidden under that business-like collar shirt he’s wearing. Go ahead and follow him when he leaves. He doesn’t have a car in the parking lot. He’ll walk around the corner to that dark alley across the street where he’ll strip off his shirt, spread his wings and fly to the office.

As I mentioned in a previous blog post, ordinary stories feature ordinary characters in ordinary situations. Speculative fiction may have its share of ordinary characters, but you also find a few extraordinary characters in extraordinary places doing extraordinary things. And like any good story, not all the characters survive.

My current work in progress (WIP) fits neatly into the speculative fiction box because it covers a wide range of storytelling with elements of science fiction when a space alien is marooned on earth and has to fit in with the other teenagers at the local high school, fantasy as a group of friends venture into time travel that leads them through an underworld of strange and amazing creatures, a romance as two star-crossed lovers seek to find their way, horror as the friends battle monsters as evil as any straight out of Hades, and historical fiction as the time travelers spend months in different periods.

My focus novel for this month is Hags. It’s the story of fantastic characters from the faerie like the one described above to the regular-looking guy who moved back to Naperville, Illinois, after 15 years in prison, to the girl next door who… well, we’re not sure at the beginning of the story… but could she be a hag as wicked as any from the Middle Ages? And what about the local high school principal? The principal is your pal unless you happen to be a teenage girl. Need I say more? As my focus novel for October, Hags is only $.99 for the Kindle edition this month. Click here to purchase.

Novel Quote
“The creature wore blue jeans and a red shirt tucked into his waistband as he flitted about from golden daffodils to blue forget-me-nots like a bee shopping for nectar.”
Hags by Paul R. Lloyd

Wednesday, October 2, 2013

Where do you locate the monsters?

You can place a story in a real location as I did by setting Steel Pennies in West Chester, Pennsylvania, and Hags in Naperville, Illinois. My other novel, Fulfillment, is set in the first century in ancient Israel. My Jude Nerdworthy short story series is set in Warrenville, Illinois.

Some authors like to make up their own world, either as a realistic place such as Winesburg, Ohio, or one of imagination such as the shire of the Hobbits. In my current work in progress, I have both the real and the fantastic. The novel is set in Wheaton, Illinois, but quickly takes the main characters on a journey into a fantastic underworld inhabited by a vicious group of trolls and other monsters.

Location sets the mood of the story. Hemingway wrote about seeking a “clean, well-lighted place” but his characters never quite find it until one goes fishing on the Big Two-Hearted River. Hemingway’s dark bars and apartments set a tone of decay and depression in a fallen world. That mood carries over into his brooding characters.

A happy place does the same thing. Oz sets a joyful mood to support a lighthearted scarecrow, tin woodsman and cowardly lion. But the location changes when the main characters have to face the wicked witch in a dark, scary castle.

My feature novel this month is Hags. It is set in a real location, the city of Naperville, Illinois, with side trips to Warrenville, Oak Brook and Chicago. The places may exist in the real world, but the story takes place in the realm of the fantastic as faeries, demons and hags populate a story filled with mystery as Micah Probert seeks two serial killers in a quest to clear his name. The Kindle version has been reduced to $.99 this month. For the Kindle or paperback versions, please click here.

Tuesday, October 1, 2013

Passing the First Sentence Test

How do you decide which book to read? You’re browsing the shelves of the local bookstore or the electronic shelves of Amazon for your next read. How do you choose?

If a friend says, “Hey, you have to read this book,” I’m likely to check it out. As an author, I meet other authors online or at book festivals. I like to browse the Kindle shelves for the tomes these other authors produce.

No matter how I find a book, I make my purchase selection based on the first sentence. I enjoy reading the blurb in the Description section on Amazon and on the back cover if I visit a bookstore. But for me it’s about that first sentence. I call it the first sentence test. The big question is: Does the first sentence grab me.

A long time ago in a career far away, I wrote, “Quality writing grabs your attention and doesn’t let go until your message is delivered and understood.” At the time, I was writing about advertising copy, but the truth is it applies so well to fiction.

Now, it’s your turn to judge a first sentence. This is how I open my horror novel Hags:

From the mattress on the floor of the back bedroom of his antique Victorian fixer-upper, Micah Probert heard a far off scream.

Are you curious? Does this sentence make you want to know where the scream came from? If you do, then consider the second test of a good novel – the first paragraph test. Here’s the entire first paragraph of Hags:

From the mattress on the floor of the back bedroom of his antique Victorian fixer-upper, Micah Probert heard a far off scream. An equally distant clang of heavy metal followed. Then two muffled voices, a male and a female. The sound of feet scampering followed by a loud buzz made Micah picture a prehistoric dragonfly. Then came the silence.

Does the first paragraph of Hags snag your interest? Do you want to know what happens next? If yes, then Hags passed your first paragraph test.

While some authors prefer to set the stage for a few paragraphs or pages before the action begins, others, myself included, prefer to start in the middle of the action and then catch you up on the details as the story charges ahead.  It’s a matter of taste.

If you would like to know what happens next in Hags, click here. Only $.99 this month.

Monday, September 30, 2013

Hags Again

With Halloween around the corner, I have selected Hags as my focus novel for the month of October. The price of Hags has been reduced to $.99 for the Kindle version for the entire month. If you haven’t read Hags yet, here’s what it’s all about:

This Present Darkness meets The Blair Witch Project in my full-length horror novel Hags. After 15 years in prison for a crime he claims he didn’t commit, Micah Probert returns to his hometown of Naperville, Illinois, where he starts his first day by discovering a human-sized faerie flitting about in his backyard, a dead body in the parking lot behind his house, a pioneer ghost in his kitchen, and a local coffee shop that serves the darkest roast this side of Hades. It’s in this coffee shop that his ex-girlfriend from high school works and where he runs into her sister, the accuser in Micah’s long ago trial.

But the real action begins when Micah learns that the beautiful young woman living next door to his fixer-upper, the girl he has just started dating, may actually be a witch as wicked as any from medieval times. Mix in a few dark secrets, a serial killer or two, a hot romance or two, and this novel takes you deep into the heart of horror in the suburbs. Will Micah heed the call to spiritual warfare with the evil forces mounted against him in time to save the city of Naperville? And will he discover the secret identity of the second hag who is out to destroy him? Find out when you read Hags. For paperback or Kindle version, click here.

Novel Quote
"In the half awake time before rising when images, dreams and half dreams ascend from the darkness of the soul and imprint themselves on the memory for the rest of the day, Micah Probert observed the faerie in a mountain meadow."
Hags by Paul R. Lloyd

Thursday, September 26, 2013

What Holds Your Attention in Speculative Fiction?

Speculative fiction includes science fiction, fantasy, horror and those creepy stories that don’t fit into a box with a genre label. Think of Twilight Zone and you get the idea.

What is it about speculative stories that hold our attention? A story works because the author blended the elements into a beautiful tapestry that delights and entertains the reader.

A well-told tale is located in a specific time and place. The author may change both as the story progresses, but the locale has to be believable. The location doesn’t have to be an actual place. Some of the best writing takes us to made up worlds like that galaxy far away that serves as the setting for Star Wars. Or you could tell a tale set in a real environment but with a dystopian twist like London after the zombie invasion has wiped everyone out except for a small band of intrepid survivors.

Stories revolve around characters. Ordinary stories feature ordinary characters in ordinary situations. Speculative fiction may have its share of ordinary characters, but you also find a few extraordinary characters in extraordinary places doing extraordinary things.

Speculative fiction moves at a pace appropriate to the tale. Science Fiction tales may need extra time for the author to create the fantastic world of the story, including an explanation of the science behind space travel, time travel, atomic fallout’s contribution to the size of insects, etc. But once the story is setup, it takes off at lightning speed. That because fantastic journeys are rarely languid. There’s simply too much going on to maintain a slow pace.

Location, characters and pace are three of the many elements that form the fabric of a good story. They provide clues to solving the mystery of my new novel Steel Pennies. The location is a working class neighborhood of a small Pennsylvania town in 1960. The characters are a group of teenagers whose summer is destroyed by a serial killer. The pace is fast as you might expect from a thriller. Check it out on Amazon by clicking here.

Wednesday, September 25, 2013

How Young is Too Young for a Teenage Relationship?

Teen couples experience emotions at the extremes. They call lust love while having little understanding of the commitment love requires. If they learn the lessons of love, the lust will give way to a loving, committed relationship. If not, they eventually tire of each other and move on to new objects of desire. The extremes of love and lust among teen couples are fun to write about and a pleasure to read. There is no need to delve into the pornographic details of a backseat romance, but teens have an awkwardness and innocence that is both a joy to see and a cause of breakups.

As a writer, I consider age important to whether my characters will have a successful loving relationship. In my stories, teens of the same age have a chance, but it will be tough for them. The maturity level of the boy and girl are important to their success as a couple. Because girls mature earlier than boys, successful relationships happen when the girl dates one or two years up. Boys succeed when they date one or two years down.

A big age gap creates its own problems. For example an age difference of three years is too much because it tends to be abusive. It’s difficult to have an equal status when one of the teens is that much older.

An example of a couple with a three-year age gap can be found in my new novel Steel Pennies. Penny Durkin loves Tommy McConnell, but Penny is 17 and Tommy is 13. The story is a thriller that requires Tommy to protect Penny from a serial killer. That’s a big burden to place on a 13 year old boy’s shoulders. The love story weaves as a thread throughout the novel as Tommy and friends attempt to solve the case. At first, Penny plays with Tommy’s affections because she knows he has a crush on her. As the story progresses, watch how this playful teasing evolves into a classical romance between two star-crossed lovers. The ending is a shocker so I’ll let you read the story and enjoy it without giving away any of the secrets of this full length novel.

Check out Steel Pennies on Amazon by clicking here.

Tuesday, September 24, 2013

A Well-Twinkled High School Memory

Reggie Van Fleet drooled whenever he spotted Charlene Wilkins, the tall blonde with emerald green eyes and a body made for Hollywood. But Reggie and Charlene lived in Lansdowne, Pennsylvania, in 1964, not Hollywood, California in 2015. Reggie about died when Charlene said yes to his invitation to the junior prom at Lansdowne-Aldan High School.

“But not if there’s a full moon,” said Charlene.

“What’s wrong with the full moon?” Reggie, who hadn’t learned yet how to take a hint, asked.

“My family keeps me under lock and key on the full moon. No dates allowed.”

“Not even for prom?”

“Reggie, you know I’m a werewolf, right? It wouldn’t do for me to show up in a full-length blonde fur coat, cold black nose and a mouth full of canine teeth.”

“I love an honest girl, but I never guessed. You always look so… so… clean shaven at school. I mean, I’d never know if you didn’t tell me. But your hair appears to be a B or C on the Fischer–Saller scale so I’m sure you’d be okay if you wore it long at the prom. Everyone likes those shades.”

“I could check with the prom committee on hair length. In the meantime, I’m sure I’m not the only one with secrets, Reggie Van Fleet. My Dad swears you were in his eleventh grade lit class at good old LAHS. And didn’t I see drool dripping off those fangs of yours? I’m sure a dentist could do something with them.”

“You do recall the dentist vanished mysteriously about six months ago, right?”

“You didn’t?” Charlene gasped.

“Mom chased me out to the dentist before I could drink my dinner. I was so thirsty. And then Dr. Martin started poking around in my mouth. He leaned in so close and his jugular vein practically pulsated with the sweet elixir of life.”

“I ate the eye doctor once. That’s why I’m not allowed to wear glasses until I’m eighteen. That’s two full years away.”

“I don’t have that problem, I’m already past eighteen.”

“When did you turn eighteen?”

“In 1793.”

“And you’re still a teenager?”

“I’m a teenage vampire.”

“My Dad would kill me if he knew I dated a vampire.”

“My Dad has forbidden me to date werewolves. He said werewolf blood will make me sick. But I figure we’re okay as long as I don’t suck you dry.”

“I might tear you limb from limb on a full moon, Reggie. You wouldn’t want that would you?”

“There’s only one thing to do.” Reggie pounded his fist into his hand, raising a dust cloud of twinkles.

“Not go out? But I like you a lot, Reggie. And I always wanted to be close to you since I was in kindergarten and you were a junior in high school. And look, you waited for me to catch up with you. How sweet.”

“I didn’t exactly wait for you, my dear. I’ll still be a junior in high school when you’re too old to teach new tricks to.”

“Oh, but at least we can be together now. But you said you had an idea.”

“Yes, I should have thought of this 125 years ago. Don’t know how I missed it.”

“Maybe because I wasn’t born until 1947?”

“Could be. Anyway, my idea is to suck your blood while you scratch me a good one. That way I’ll be a werewolf-vampire and you’ll be one also.”

“Technically, you’ll be a werewolf-vampire and I’ll be a vampire-werewolf.”

“Same difference.”

Charlene raised her voice. “No it’s not. A werewolf-vampire started out as a vampire but then a werewolf scratched it. A vampire-werewolf, on the other hand, began as a werewolf but a vampire sank its teeth into its throat.”

Reggie’s blood, what little he still had from the previous night of snacking, boiled. His face went from death-gray to a bright orange-red color. Twinkles streamed up into the air from out of both ears. He attacked Charlene right there in the middle of third period gym class.

Their battle lasted until the bell rang, but it was long enough to raise a cloud of twinkles from Reggie. Charlene Wilkins, the vampire-werewolf, didn’t get her revenge until the night of the next full moon.

It took another 50 years for Reggie and Charlene to accept that they were stuck with each other. Reggie was Charlene’s vampire master and Charlene was Reggie’s werewolf mistress. By then, they both were juniors at the real Hollywood High School out in California with the bright lights, sunshine, and beach parties where you can twinkle all you want and not stand out in the crowd. And where there was always a handy snack around the next dune anytime the moon shone bright. And where Reggie and Charlene finally fell in love under the moon and stars in the full, eternal way of great lovers.


Do you enjoy stories of young love, especially when blood sucker meets flesh ripper? Or how about when girl meets boy in another kind of unusual relationship? If you answered yes, please allow me to introduce you to Penny Durkin and Tommy McConnell. They're two teenagers in love. Their relationship is a bit odd in that Penny is 17 and Tommy is 13. But the only unanswered question so far is the age old mystery of love. Now, let's add a little spice to the tale of Penny and Tommy. What if Penny is a mad-dog serial killer? Tommy's not sure. But if she's not, then she's definitely on the killer's list of who to hit next. Can Tommy solve this whodunit thriller before the killer strikes again? Find out by reading Steel Pennies. Check it out on Amazon.

Monday, September 23, 2013

Frankenstein’s Rant

Mrs. Frankenstein, like all women, doesn’t leave the old castle the way us regular men do. No, Mrs. Frankenstein, my darling Hildegard, has to get ready first. Let’s say we’re due at the Coplenopolis’s at 7 pm. Guess what time Mrs. Frankenstein saunters to the front door and announces “Okay, I’m ready?”

Go ahead, guess. If you said 7:05 pm, you’d be correct. Does she then proceed to the family SUV? Of course not. “Okay, I’m ready” translates into “Okay, it’s time to check to make sure I unplugged every plug in the house, turned off the stove, shut off the dryer, turned down the heat, put the trash out, fed the dog, made sure the cat is back in the house, and given written instructions to the babysitter for little Frankie and Franny.

At 7:25 pm, she slides into the passenger seat of the SUV. We need a big one because, if you saw the film, you noticed we are tall people. I think old Doctor Frankenstein added extra parts in us. I put the SUV in reverse and back out of the driveway while the missus yells at me for driving before she has a chance to buckle up and settle in.

When we finally arrive at the Coplenopolis’s, it’s 7:45 pm. But do the Coplenopolis’s see our scarred good looks at 7:45? Don’t be silly. You could stick four guys in a car and drive somewhere, I don’t care where, let’s say I haul my buddies the count, the werewolf and one of those mummy chaps to choir practice (strip joint). What do you think we do when we get there?  Exactly. We get out of the car. Four doors on the old SUV pop open at approximately the same time – immediately upon stoping.

Now, let’s consider Mrs. Frankenstein, who by the way, is like most women you know, if a bit uglier, well, I shouldn’t say “uglier.” It’s an ugly word. She’s just a little bit scar-challenged if you get my drift.

“Don’t worry,” says the missus. “Everyone always comes late.” She says this with a straight face while I’m checking out the 32 automobiles stuffed into the Coplenopolis’s driveway. I make the mistake of popping my door open. Big mistake. Wife says, “Where are you going?” Doesn’t she know?

Okay, the search for her purse begins. Then she asks if she should wear her sweater into the house. “Why’d you wear it, if you didn’t want to wear it?” I ask. This conversation is a repeat of the same stupid conversation we’ve had since 1889 so you’d think I’d learn a new line or two, but no, I’m Frankenstein’s monster. He didn’t exactly steal the high IQ brain for my head.  Anyway, the wife has removed the sweater and is now going through her purse. “Purse,” of course, means that giant tote bag she drags around with her so rummaging through it takes a while.

“Aren’t you ready yet, dear?” I ask repeating the century old script.

“In a moment, darling. I want to check my makeup.”

Let’s think about this, boys and girls, she wants to check her makeup. Mrs. Frankenstein wants to take a gander at her face. The mirror cracked the first time she peeked at her mug in this vehicle, and that was a long time ago so I don’t  know what’s she’s expecting to see. Did you ever try to check a face full of scars in a cracked mirror?

A few minutes go by. The face that could sink a thousand ships now has shiny red lips and some rosy colored rouge smeared on her scarred cheeks. The scars now stand out as deep rose lines against a pale-as-death complexion because the rouge settles in the deepest places.

“How do I look?” she asks.

By this time I remember the consequences of truth. “Beautiful, my darling.”

She gives me an angry look. “Why are you just sitting there? We’re late. Let’s go.”

Yes, finally, she exits the SUV and heads for the front door. I’m about to ring the doorbell when she says, “I’ve changed my mind.”

Where have I heard that before?

She smiles like there’s no reason in the world why I should be beside myself with Frankensteinian anger. She says, “I think I’ll take my sweater after all. Will you run to the car and get it for me?”


Deep inside many a monster is what used to be a troubled human. Dracula was once a medieval count with a propensity for scaring the delights out of his enemies, especially the invading Turks. The Werewolf of London was an English bloke who minded his own business until one day a dog bit him. Well, he thought it was a dog. Our friend Frankenstein was a pile of dead bodies without a care in this world when a crazy scientist began sewing bits and pieces of people together.

In my new novel, Steel Pennies, there’s a monster loose who doesn’t look like a vampire, werewolf or a hideous pile of spare parts sewn together, but my character is a human monster just the same. Your challenge is to figure out who the monster is before this character kills Tommy’s girlfriend. Tommy is the main character in this teenaged romance gone wild. Blending humor with horror is a fun challenge for me as an author. But the humor fades away before the shocking conclusion of Steel Pennies. Did you enjoy reading Frankenstein’s rant? If yes, you’ll love the fast paced action of Steel Pennies. Check it out on Amazon.

Friday, September 20, 2013

Mirror Fried Vampires

To read from the beginning of this story, please click here.

Episode 5 of Jude Nerdworthy, Teenage Monster Fighter, in The Day the Characters Escaped

With Marvin directing us, Marylou, Fritz, the wheel loader operator, and I positioned the mirrors so that we could flash sunlight up into the rafters inside the storage closet where the giant bats slept.

All we had to do was wait for the rain to stop.

Marty Surgermond, one of the foremen, came in from a jobsite closed down by the rain.

“What’s with the mirrors?” he asked.

“We’re about to fry some vampires,” Marvin said.

“Not in my barn,” Marty said.

“Why not?” Marvin asked.

Marty reached into the cab of his pickup and produced a large pistol. “Rain for one thing. They are my friends for another.”

“You’re friends with a flock of bats?” Marylou asked.

“You mean a colony of bats,” said Marty.

“Either way, we plan to show them the light of day,” I said.

“Over my dead body,” Marty said. You should never say “over my dead body” if you’re a character in a horror story. Marty, who obviously was serving as the Renfield for the local bat colony, should have known that Marylou Brambach was a gifted skid steer operator who at the moment had the skid steer bucket headed straight for him.

Marty fired his pistol at Marylou until he used up a clip of ammo, but Marylou had the bucket raised on the skid steer which served as a giant bulletproof vest. Marty’s last word was “Ahhgphh!” which roughly translates to “crap.”

We heard the fluttering of bats excited by the aroma as Marty's blood ran along the concrete floor of the barn.

The rain stopped.

Phew, were we ever glad.

We repositioned the mirrors, except for the last one. The door to the storage closet flew open. Three giant bats landed on the remains of Marty. Three vampires in human form knelt to lick up the blood on the concrete.

I aimed the last of the mirrors to direct sunlight on the vampire colony. I cooked five of them, but the sixth flew up into the darkness of the rafters. I chased the bat with light from the mirror system, but the creature was too fast. It was like trying to shoot down a British Spitfire with a German ack-ack gun.

Fortunately for us, the bat became overly excited and flew out the barn door into the sunshine. It almost made it to the safety of a shaded oak tree before it crashed in a smokey mess.

Once again, the tiny city of Warrenville, Illinois, was safe from the vampire, werewolf and zombie menace. All that remained was to help Marvin Bloodleder figure out how to keep his characters from escaping his books.

“Maybe it’s because they’re electronic pages,” Marylou suggested.

“I never thought of that,” said Marvin. “I bet my laptop sprung a leak.”


Today's novel quote
"We stopped where the skull waited for us."
Steel Pennies

Check this out:  Jude Nerdworthy is light-hearted horror that pokes fun at my hometown of Warrenville, Illinois. If you would like to sink your fangs into a darker, more terrifying story, try my new novel Steel Pennies. It's set in my former hometown of West Chester, Pennsylvania, where they grow mushrooms and teachers among other stuff. It's a mystery, a thriller and a love story wrapped around the horror of a serial killer on the loose. Purchase the full-length novel for less than $3 on Amazon today. Click here.

Thursday, September 19, 2013

The Guilt of the Thirsty Vampire

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Episode 4 of Jude Nerdworthy, Teenage Monster Fighter, in The Day the Characters Escaped

Unless you can suck them into the open at daybreak, Vampires are the toughest monsters to kill because you have to get up close and personal with them. This is what they want you to do so you are as likely to fall into a vampire’s snare as you are to trap one of them.

Religious artifacts work well against vampires if you combine wearing one with a healthy dollop of faith. This was no problem for me or Marylou as we were both devout sex addicts, oops, I mean Presbyterians. We also shared a certain sentimental affection for the fine art of bathing vampires in Holy Water.

By the time we finished with the high school teachers, I mean werewolves, sunup was only minutes away. Marylou and I scanned the sky for large bats. We didn’t have long to wait. We spotted six huge white bats fluttering around Warrenville’s Public Works building. Surely we would find blood suckers there if nowhere else.

The public works building has a large barn in the back with very high rafters. This is where the city stores the skid steers, trucks, cherry pickers and other heavy equipment used to keep our streets safe and in good working order. At the back of the barn, we found a huge storage room with no windows. I poked my head into the closet and shined a flashlight into the rafters above where I spotted a row of large bats, each about eighteen inches long.

One of the bats yelled, “Hey, turn out that light. We’re trying to sleep up here. Oops.”

I turned off the light and slammed the storage room door. “Marylou, do vampires say ‘oops?’”

“I don’t know,” said Marylou.

“They do in my books,” said Marvin.

“Then there’s a good chance those giant bats are vampires up in the rafters in that closet,” I said.

“What should we do?” Marylou asked.

At that moment, a front end loader pulled into the storage barn.

“Where do you want me to put these mirrors?” the driver asked.

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Today's novel quote
"Wickedness attracted and scared us at the same time."
Steel Pennies

Check this out: Unlike Jude Nerdworthy who sees monsters on a daily basis on the pages of this blog, the only monster you'll find in Steel Pennies is that certain someone responsible for murder, mayhem and mischief in 1960 West Chester, PA. Whodunit? Find out when you download Steel Pennies for less than $3 on Amazon today.

Wednesday, September 18, 2013

The Zombie Destruction

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Episode 3 of Jude Nerdworthy, Teenage Monster Fighter, in The Day the Characters Escaped

While the zombies invaded Warrenville, Illinois, Marylou Brombach and I finished our entire vocabulary of words that rhyme with "duck" except for one word that Marylou refused to say because she didn't want to sound like a chicken and besides it had an extra letter in it. 

“What should we do?” Marvin asked.

“Skip that word and move on to the zombies," I said.

"But the zombies," Marvin implored.

"Shoot ‘em in the head. Works every time.” I said. Shooting zombies isn’t the big deal some people think it is. Zombies aren’t the brightest of people, despite their love of eating brains.

"But I don't have a gun," said Marvin.

"We'll take care of it," I said.

Marylou Brombach and I ran to Albert Bringlebaum’s house to recruit him for the zombie action committee. His gun-toting dad was home and they both volunteered to shoot up the town.

“Can I bomb the zombies?” Albert asked.

“If it works,” I said. “The main thing is to destroy their heads. That’s what kills them.”

The sounds of gunshots and bomb explosions soon filled the night. Apparently finding zombies roaming around the Chicago suburbs is not difficult.

For the werewolves, Marylou and I went to my house where we loaded up on silver bullets for our AK-47s. The next step was to snag a hammer and a few oak stakes to stuff in our belts for the vampires. While many vampire slayers prefer to use a backpack, my preference has always been to belt stuff. What you gain in speed to heart offsets any issues with belt-related slippage. You can always pick up an oak stake that falls out of your belt, but you can’t always pull one out of a backpack faster than a vampire can suck.

To find a werewolf, follow the howling, growling and chewing sounds. Marylou and I found and killed six werewolves that way. Being a small burb, we knew all six werewolves from high school. Who knew our teachers had formed a committee. Miss Tribbett had been the biggest surprise. She was a science teacher who should have known better than to join a cult of moonlit shape shifters. Mr. Trottlebaum, the boys gym instructor, was no surprise.

We were ready to move on to the vampires until Marvin pointed out that we had killed the wrong werewolves. “I don’t write about teachers turned werewolves,” he said. “I write about ordinary citizens who become werewolves. People like you and me.”

Marylou fired at me and Marvin.

Fortunately she missed.

“He means ordinary people in the same way that we are ordinary people, Marylou. He doesn’t mean us specifically. We’re not werewolves.”

“Yeah, but those people could be,” Marylou said as she opened fire on a crowd of extremely furry, sharp-toothed citizens who growled a lot.

“That’s them,” cried Marvin.

Marylou and I killed three of Marvin’s werewolves before the rest of them attacked Marvin. At first I thought Marvin was a goner, but then he began to shake and bake as he absorbed the remaining werewolves back into himself.

“I just got a great idea for Chapter 23 where the werewolves return,” Marvin said.

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Tuesday, September 17, 2013

Werewolves on the Prowl

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Episode 2 of Jude Nerdworthy, Teenage Monster Fighter, in The Day the Characters Escaped

The elderly gentleman took off without drinking the werewolf’s blood. The werewolf listened to the “zom… zom… zom” song of the Warrenville marching zombie brigade and took off for the woods behind Marylou Brombach’s house. Marylou and I made out for another minute before the zombies came too close.

Fortunately, we had experience with zombies, although fictional zombies may be tougher to kill than the real ones.

“Maybe we should call Professor Booger from Fermilab,” Marylou suggested. Fermilab, the national accelerator laboratory famous for racing neutrinos around the track, happened to be next door to Warrenville. Professor Booger happened to be a mad scientist who was rumored to work there when not hanging out in his garage attempting to invent the real flubber, an antigravity device used mainly on Model T Fords.

I said, “Let’s run to Marvin Ledbeder’s house because in the time it took to read that paragraph of explanation above, the zombies had enough time to break through your wide open front door. It wasn’t much of a challenge, but the zombies figured it out anyway. RUN!”

I snagged Marylou’s hand and we took off running in all caps. We stopped long enough in the garage to convince Marylou’s Mom to drive us in her pickup truck to Marvin Ledbeder’s house in the part of town where the ancient houses hung out.

We didn’t slow down until we hit Mr. Ledbeder’s front door which only hurt for a little while. Fortunately the door wasn’t locked because, well, that’s the kind of town Warrenville is.

“What are you people doing here?” Marvin asked.

“Zombies, vampires and werewolves, oh my,” said Marylou.

“Don’t tell me they escaped again?” Marvin asked.

“They escaped again along with Ms. Bucket," I said.

“You had to say it, didn’t you?” asked Marvin. “We’ll have to round them up then.”

“Now would be a good time. The zombies are stomping around town looking for brains,” I said.

“It’s a good thing that boy genius Jude Nerdworthy isn’t around,” said Marvin. “He’d know how to round up these monsters.”

“I’m around,” I said. “I’m Jude Nerdworthny.” Sometimes you have to emphasize who you are before people will listen to you.

“Why are you waiting?” asked Marvin.

“Waiting for what?” I asked.

“Do something. You’re the monster fighter. I thought you’d know what to do.”

“I told you about them. You’re the author. Round them up.”

“Not so easy as it sounds, young man. Once a character escapes, it holds no loyalty to the author.”

“If you won’t, then I will,” I said.

“But how?” Marylou asked.

“The old fashioned way, Marylou. With pluck and luck and other words that rhyme with duck.”

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Monday, September 16, 2013

Marianna Bucket Saunters In Followed by the Horse

Episode 1 of Jude Nerdworthy, Teenage Monster Fighter, in The Day the Characters Escaped

For local independent horror novel author Marvin Bloodleder, things got out of hand the day his characters escaped. I became involved when Marianna Bucket sauntered into the Brombach house like she owned the place. I was on the couch making out with Marylou while her mom grease monkeyed around with the Chevy pickup in the garage.

“May I help you,” Marylou asked.

“No, dear. I’m fine, except I don’t know what you’re doing here. And who is that with you?”

“I live here and this is my boyfriend, Jude Nerdworthy, teenage monster fighter. We were busy making out despite it being so early in the morning or so late in the evening depending on when we started kissing which was sometime after the late movie at Roxy’s Picture Show.”

“I’m afraid you people will have to leave or I’m going to call the… well, I’m not sure who I’m supposed to call.” Ms. Bucket studied the ceiling for a good five minutes. She didn’t move the whole time. Not a muscle. I’m not even sure she breathed during that time. “Well, I’m afraid I don’t know who to call, but I do know that I own this house and you’ll have to leave now. Go on. Your parents will be worried.

“My parents live here,” Marylou said.

“No, I’ve already explained that, dear. I live here." She gave us a street address that matched the Brombach's address on McGurk Court. "I should think I’d know my own address. How do you think I arrived here this morning?”

“Where did you come from?” I asked.

“Work, of course. Well, now that I think about it, I may have simply stepped out of Marvin Bloodleder’s butt. He’s my author, you know. Yes, of course. I remember now. How silly of me to forget. I stepped out of his butt at five-thirty this morning. But he didn’t write anyone for me to call. Well, I suppose the police will have to do. Now, where did I put the phone?”

“Excuse me, ma’am,” I said. “But did you say you are a character out of a book?”

“I did, didn’t I? That doesn’t make a lot of sense, though, does it?”

“No, ma’am, it doesn’t,” I said.

“That’s because it’s still a manuscript. I fell out of the manuscript or the author’s butt around page 247, right after Simon Snicksnaker blew my house to smithereens.”

“As you can see, Mrs. Bucket, my house isn’t blown up. So this can’t be your home, can it?” Marylou said.

“Oh, I didn’t realize I was married,” said Ms. Bucket.

“Perhaps you’re not,” I said.

At that moment, a man with a bare, hairless chest and dark trousers walked in pulling the reins on a horse. The other end of the reins were attached to a great black stallion.

“Ah, Marianna, my darling, I’ve found you at last.” The bare-chested hunk swept Marianna into his arms and planted a supersized whopper of a kiss on her lips.

“I thought Marvin Bloodleder wrote horror novels, not romance,” Marylou said.

“To prove her correct, a tall man covered completely in fur with a business suit burst in behind the horse. The horse whinnied while the wolf-man wiped his shoes off on the carpet.

The men growled and snarled several times which scared the horse, but the wolf-man lacked the ability or sense to move out of the way. He did, however, continue wiping his shoes on the Brombach carpeting.

The bare-chested man leaped on the horse to ride bareback. He swept Marianna up onto the horse with him. Together they cantered through the dining room and kitchen, presumably out to the backyard.

The wolf-man snarled some more until an elderly gentleman dressed in an antique tuxedo appeared at Marylou’s door. “May I come in?” he asked.

“No!” I shouted. Never invite strangers into your home, especially if they are using a toothpick to peck away at their four-inch long upper incisors as the new visitor was doing.

“Very well, but would you mind sending the werewolf out? He has a rare blood type that I crave.” The elderly gentleman smiled at us while tucking his tooth pick into his cummerbund.

“All we need now is a zombie,” Marylou exclaimed.

That’s when things became ticklish.

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Thursday, September 12, 2013

Where’s the Bloody Formula?

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Episode 4 of Jude Nerdworthy, Teenage Monster Fighter, in The Silence of the Books

The bullets fired by Officer McNally weakened, but did not kill, the Warrenville Public Library District’s copy of Mordecai Blount’s Book of the Undead. I rolled the book off me before it could replenish its blood supply from my jugular vein.

As I suspected, I found the spell for bringing classic books to life tucked into the back of the book by old Mordecai Blount. According to the note, he developed the spell to take revenge on Warrenville for sending him to jail for murdering a half dozen of our town’s teenagers back around the First World War.

The easiest way to break a magic spell is to unravel it backwards. Starting at the end of the bloodied formula in Mordecai Blount's Book of the Undead, I performed the following tasks:
Throw up.
Eat pancake and corn syrup mixture.
Pour on one cup of corn syrup.
Place 4 pancakes on a plate.
Fry on griddle until brown on both sides.
Mix in one dozen pairs of frog eyes.
Mix in two dozen pig toenails.
Mix in one cup of bat blood.
Mix in 347 mosquitoes, living or dead (may substitute one baby vampire).
Mix in shredded paper.
Shred one paperback copy of The Catcher in the Rye by J.D. Salinger (well-seasoned dogeared copy with student notes in margins works best, especially if printed before 1990.)
Mix one box of the cheapest pancake mix you can find at your local supermarket following the directions on the box.
Purchase one box of the cheapest pancake mix you can find at your local supermarket.
Go to your local supermarket.

I arrived at the supermarket at 8:00 am to complete the reverse spell. The sun had been up for several hours by that time so the classics had returned to their lair in the Warrenville Public Library building lower level behind the “furnace room” door. There was no way to know if the spell was broken until midnight.

Marylou Brombach and I staked out the library with our new friend Officer McNally who showed up with a replenished supply of bullets. We waited until midnight to be sure the books remained asleep. At approximately 12:30 am, Officer McNally declared that he was calling it a night. Marylou and I gave little fist pumps knowing the rest of the night belonged to us in the “furnace room” of the Warrenville Public Library where we enjoyed the silence of the books.


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Wednesday, September 11, 2013

Officer McNally Turns the Renegade Books Loose

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Episode 3 of Jude Nerdworthy, Teenage Monster Fighter, in The Silence of the Books

Sonnet 111 wasted no time sinking its tiny fangs into Officer McNally’s neck. I swept the Shakespeare across the floor but not in time to avoid a little trickle of blood appearing on Officer McNally’s neck. There was no time to block the other books from escaping their secret chamber in the lower level of the Warrenville Public Library.

Despite my reputation as a teenaged monster fighter, Officer McNally had laughed at my contention that the blood-sucking books were right behind the library storage room door, the one marked “furnace room” to keep bookworms away. Officer McNally also had ignored Moby Dick fluttering around the rafters. Instead, he yanked the “furnace room” door open to the joy of The Complete Works of Shakespeare. And that’s when Sonnet 111 struck.

Hundreds of books, many of them not read since the Ford Administration, flew out of the “furnace room” and escaped into the night. These volumes were too anxious for their freedom and a supply of fresh blood to bother with me or Officer McNally.

As the tomes disappeared into the night, I rushed into the secret chamber in pursuit of Mordecai Blount’s Book of the Undead. An old oak cabinet in the back corner of the room wiggled and vibrated to the sound of a huge living book trapped inside.

I found a screwdriver where I always find one – in my back pocket – and proceeded to yank off the lock on the cabinet door. Before the padlock hit the floor, Mordecai Blount’s Book of the Undead flew at my face. I snagged it with both hands but its huge size made it a tough opponent. The book knocked me to the floor as I begged McNally for help.

McNally tried to pull the book off me, but it wanted revenge for the last time I had encountered this vile tome of magic spells. Officer McNally pulled his gun out.

“Don’t shoot it,” I shouted. “You could blow a hole in my theory on how to stop these renegade classics.”

McNally emptied his pistol into Mordecai Blount’s Book of the Undead, causing profuse bleeding.

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Tuesday, September 10, 2013

Mrs. Appleburger Sleeps, But the Books Wake Up

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Episode 2 of Jude Nerdworthy, Teenage Monster Fighter, in The Silence of the Books

The evil books locked away in the basement of the Warrenville Pubic Library have long fangs they use to suck your blood. Don’t worry, the books sit on the shelves hidden away behind a door marked “Furnace Room” in the library basement. The ancient tomes sleep during normal library hours.

Did you ever wonder why the library closes at nine o’clock every night? It gives the staff three hours to clear the place out before the volumes go on a blood-lust rampage at midnight.

Mrs. Appleburger, our high school English teacher, found out about the blood thirsty books one night this past summer. She worked late doing research on her doctoral thesis on the use of the supernatural in books that otherwise would have been considered classical literature rather than mere pulp fiction.

Mrs. Appleburger fell asleep amidst the stacks in the furnace room at eight-thirty-eight in the evening. The time is important because Madeline Inglebock checked the furnace room at eight-thirty-two to announce the library would be closing soon. No way was she or any other staff member returning to the “furnace room” before sunrise. You never know when a book might wake up early with an appetite for fresh blood.

When Mrs. Appleburger woke up, she spotted Bleak House flapping its pages near the ceiling. A giant pair of fangs hung down from this Dickens classic much the same way you would spot legs on a bat. She told me later she swatted the book away before it could attach itself to her neck.

Huckleberry Finn hissed at her with a Mississippi accent. Mrs. Appleburger enjoyed reading Twain so she snagged it out of the air and began perusing it. The more she read, the more the book purred. Mrs. Appleburger soon recognized that the best way to keep old books from sucking your blood is to read them.

Mrs. Appleburger read as fast as she could, but she was no speed reader despite her advanced degree. She called me for help. I rushed over with a broom and swatted the books out of the way until Mrs. Appleburger could make her way to the exit. I slammed the door as Shakespeare’s complete works banged against the other side, making a clanking noise against the door metal.

“I thought you had to read books to bring them to life,” said Mrs. Appleburger.

I swatted at a fanged Moby Dick that had escaped the furnace room. “These books may have been cursed by Mordacai Blount. I’ll check into it.”

“Good idea,” said Mrs. Appleburger. She ran out of the library leaving me to deal with Moby Dick and the police officer assigned to check out the reason the silent alarm went off at the library.

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Monday, September 9, 2013

The Blood-Thirsty Library

Episode 1 of Jude Nerdworthy, Teenage Monster Fighter, in The Silence of the Books

Fanged things, objects of the imagination, and nightmares live behind the secret door guarding the hidden chamber in the lower level of the public library in Warrenville, Illinois, my home town. I first entered the “furnace room” while searching for information on how to save my girlfriend, Marylou Brombach, who at the time had been turned into a semi-vampire.

You may think the Warrenville Public Library is like any normal suburban Chicago book and video repository with lots of extruded aluminum pillars and posts along with glass windows, imitation wood chairs and a coffee machine, but this mausoleum of mischief and misplaced feigns has books, lots and lots of books. The woodwork is real and so is the secret chamber.

Okay, the room isn’t much of a secret if I, Jude Nerdworthy, teenage monster fighter, know about it, but most people ignore the door on the lower level with the “Furnace Room” sign nailed to it. They never think about how the furnace is behind the unmarked door next to the elevator. Why they never investigate the unmarked door is beside the point. People become curious and peek behind it. But they find the furnace room. The real secret, as I said, waits patiently behind the “Furnace Room” door.

In the pages of a huge medieval book I found the recipe that saved Marylou Brombach. The title was Mordecai Blount’s Book of the Undead. What I didn’t realize at the time was the books behind the furnace room door come alive late at night. How they know it’s night time is beyond me, but somehow they figure it out in the depths of our dark, windowless library basement. Maybe one of them has a clock built into it.

I know your teachers may have told you about living books, those ancient boring classics that nobody reads but everyone wants to say they have. But trust me on this, the living books at the Warrenville, Illinois, public library are alive and they crave your blood.

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Friday, June 7, 2013

No Need for Fangs, Marylou

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Episode 9 of Jude Nerdworthy, Monster Fighter in Oh, No! My Girlfriend’s a Vampire.

Marylou Brombach’s four-inch semi-vampire fangs were within an inch of my neck when I lifted my left arm high in the air.

“Marylou, no need to bite. See, my vein leaked out of my cut.” It sounded as lame to me when I said it as it did to you as you read it, but I don’t write this stuff, so don’t blame me. Anyway, you’re probably not a semi-vampire, but Marylou was and a diet of fresh-sucked blood doesn’t have a positive impact on your intelligence.

Marylou jumped back startled. Why? Who knows. I’d have gone for the jugular myself. Anyway, she did startle perhaps due to my voice sounding so strong with no hint of fear. Or she actually liked my Don Knotts imitation.

Marylou smiled as she retracted her fangs. “Jude, you’re so considerate. That’s one of the reasons I’ve always been attracted to you. And you’re blood tastes so sweet, doesn’t it? I only had a little sip last time we were together. Let me check that cut of yours. Oh, yes, I see. The doctor didn’t do a very good job of sewing you up, did he? Well, I’ll fix him right after I suck your blood. Oh, don’t worry, you won’t die. You’ll merely be undead or maybe you’ll be a semi-vampire like me. I think it’s like being an apprentice.”

Marylou popped my fake vein into her mouth and sucked hard. She took in a mouthful of the garlic, olive oil and holy water mixture. She flew across the room, landing on her back by the front door. She passed out with smoke arising from her mouth, nose and ears.

I pulled the bottle of anti-semi-vampire compound from my chest, tearing my skin as the tape peeled off and my actual blood oozed from my new wounds. I pulled off the stopper and ran to Marylou. She breathed heavily while continuing to smoke. I poured the liquid into her mouth.

She swallowed. Her eyes popped open. She gasped. “Wow, that stuff is good.”

Marylou grabbed the bottle from me and drank the remaining potion.

Marylou’s mom ran down the stairs and hugged her daughter.

Marylou glanced my way with love in her eyes and smoke pouring out her ears. “Thanks, Jude. That was tasty.”

Marylou had no memory of her time as a semi-vampire. And no memory of Becky Stewart kissing me. And no memory of drinking that awful brew, which meant she wanted to kiss me. But I could smell her garlic breath from across the room and about died.


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Thursday, June 6, 2013

I Couldn’t Have Danced All Night

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Episode 8 of Jude Nerdworthy, Monster Fighter in Oh, No! My Girlfriend’s a Vampire.

At four in the morning, my semi-vampire girlfriend, Marylou Brombach, sauntered through the front door wiping her hand across her mouth. She came into the dark living room. “Fee, fee, fi, fo, fi, fo, fum. I smell the blood of a teenaged monster hunter.”

“Hi, Marylou. Hope you don’t mind if I waited up for you. I thought we should talk.” I played tunes on Mrs. Brombach’s old-fashioned boom box. The music was recorded on some kind of tape device from the last century. The music was totally out of date, but you could dance to it. I did my best Michael Jackson moonwalk to keep my concoction of olive oil, holy water and garlic well-mixed. The container was strapped to my chest with duct tape so it wouldn’t spill.

“Where’s the hammer and oak stake?” Marylou asked.

“No hammer, no wooden stake. Just me.”

“Excellent.” Marylou flew across the room, knocked me to the floor, and pinned me with her semi-vampire strength. Her four-inch fangs descended from her very wide open mouth.

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Wednesday, June 5, 2013

Red dye, Beet Juice and a Blood Sucker

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Episode 7 of Jude Nerdworthy, Monster Fighter in Oh, No! My Girlfriend’s a Vampire.

I volunteered as the Judas Goat in our attempt to reconvert Marylou Brombach to humanity. She was a semi-vampire in the tradition of Mordecai Blount and only an anti-semi-vampire concoction could save her.

We mixed the formula in my parent’s kitchen using equal parts crushed fresh garlic, olive oil and holy water. Since oil and water don’t mix, we had to keep shaking the mixture. To simulate blood, we added beet juice and a little red food coloring. The food coloring brightened the beet red to approximate fresh blood.

While Mrs. Brombach and Becky Stewart prepared the mixture, I fiddled around in the garage to affix a glass jar with a long tube which I passed through a rubber stopper. I “borrowed” the parts from Mr. Blinkmonger’s chemistry class. To the end of the plastic tube I attached a length of cow vein using duct tape and spit. I had obtained the blood vessel from the meat market in downtown Wheaton.

We filled the jar with the anti-semi-vampire mixture and ran a little through the tube and cow blood vessel hookup so it would flow immediately when sucked. We then duct taped the jar to my chest with the tube and blood vessel taped to my arm. The blood vessel appeared to have slipped out from under my bandages covering the stitches on my arm. With the setup complete, Mrs. Brombach drove me to her house.

Mrs. Brombach went to bed while I waited in the dark living room for Marylou to return from her evening of bloodlust. Our plan depended on her having enough blood frenzy left over when she returned home to be glad to see me.

She did.

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Tuesday, June 4, 2013

Mordecai Blount’s Book of the Undead

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Episode 6 of Jude Nerdworthy, Monster Fighter in Oh, No! My Girlfriend’s a Vampire.

Mrs. Brombach led us to the reference section of the Warrenville Public Library where she fumbled around the old books on a back shelf until she pulled a tome that was about 18 inches high by 12 inches wide. Mrs. Brombach blew the dust off the faded brown leather cover, but the title was worn away. She opened the book to the title page.

Mordecai Blount’s Book of the Undead was written by the infamous Warrenville citizen who was accused of murdering a half-dozen teenagers back before the First World War. Blount escaped the DuPage County jail and was never seen again.

Mrs. Brombach turned to the table of contents and dragged her finger down the list of chapters until she came to “Vampires.” One of the sections of that particular chapter was “Semi-Vampires.” She turned to page 666 as indicated in the table of contents. Near the bottom of that page, she read:

“Semi-vampires are people not completely turned into vampires, as the name implies. To turn them completely, kill them using the usual methods of blood sucking, poison, strangulation or physical violence. Be aware that monster fighters may try to save your semi-vampire by turning them back to their natural human state. This is accomplished by feeding them a combination of garlic, olive oil and holy water.”

“How much of each do we use?” Becky asked.

“Doesn’t say,” Mrs. Brombach said. “We’ll have to guess.”

“How will we get Marylou to drink such a concoction when she prefers blood?” I asked.

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Monday, June 3, 2013

Marylou Brombach’s Mom to the Rescue

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Episode 5 of Jude Nerdworthy, Monster Fighter in Oh, No! My Girlfriend’s a Vampire.

Marylou’s four-inch fangs and eighteen-inch tongue were convincing enough, but when she turned into a giant bat, I knew my girlfriend had become a vampire. But at the ER where my step-sister from 1958 had taken me, Marylou Brombach’s mom saved the day and the night.

“We need to talk,” Mrs. Brombach said.

I smiled through Vicodin and the thirty-five stitches needed to close my wounded left arm. I was dizzy from blood loss but succeeded in convincing my mom and dad to turn down the doctor’s invitation to spend the night in the hospital. I didn’t remember Mom and Dad arriving at the ER, but I knew when they left because I was alone with Becky Stewart and Mrs. Brombach.

“I don’t want to kill her,” I said through the Vicodin haze.

“I know,” said Mrs. Brombach. “I don’t either. That’s why I’m glad Marylou is not a vampire yet.”

“Looks like a duck, walks like a duck, quacks like a duck…” Becky said.

“Right, but she’s neither a duck nor a vampire,” Mrs. Brombach insisted.

“Then what is she?” asked Becky, my 1958 stepsister.

“She’s a semi-vampire, a creature that hasn’t un-died yet, but has all the characteristics of a vampire. She can still be turned back from her vampire ways. You can’t be undead unless you’re dead first.”

“I don’t think it works that way in the movies,” Becky said.

“Movies don’t count,” I said. “Besides, you’ve missed more than six decades of monster movies, not to mention Stephen King’s entire body of work.

“And does Mr. King mention semi-vampires?” Becky asked.

“Mrs. Brombach mentioned it and that’s good enough for me,” I said.

“I’ll show you,” Mrs. Brombach said.

We followed Mrs. Brombach’s pickup back to Warrenville from the hospital to the library. Unfortunately it was almost closing time, but the door wasn’t locked yet.

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Friday, May 31, 2013

Bashed Vampire

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Episode 4 of Jude Nerdworthy, Monster Fighter in Oh, No! My Girlfriend’s a Vampire.

Becky’s arm flashed in front of my face as Marylou Brombach, my vampire girlfriend, was within an inch of my jugular vein. I didn’t see Becky’s crucifix in the flash, but Marylou felt it as her face smoked and she fell to the floor.

Marylou had about three seconds of stare time with eyes filled with hatred and something that looked like little tiny lightning bolts when she flew around the room like a balloon with the air leaking out of it. She turned into a pile of skin and bone that floated out the window and disappeared into the black mist.

“Let’s get you to a doctor,” Becky poured holy water over my wounds. The one on my lip puffed and smoked. When the air cleared, my lip was healed.

“The ER,” I corrected while twisting my lip to check it.

“In 1958, we rushed to the doctor’s office.”

“Today, it’s the ER. We have doctors who specialize in emergencies.”

“I’m not sure this counts as an emergency, Jude. It’s just a couple of little cuts. Twenty or thirty stitches ought to do.”

If Becky said anything else, I missed it. I remember hitting the floor and my head spinning before everything went black.

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Thursday, May 30, 2013

That Ain’t No Bat

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Episode 3 of Jude Nerdworthy, Monster Fighter in Oh, No! My Girlfriend’s a Vampire.

“Look at the giant white bat banging against the kitchen window!” Becky said.

“It has Marylou Brombach written all over it,” I said.

“How can you be so sure with so many vampires in the twenty-first century?”

“She had her arms inked. You can read her name across her bat wings.”

“Well, in my day, the vampires had enough sense to stay in the movies and leave real people alone.”

“Becky, we have to do something. I’m bleeding to death, and Marylou wants to suck my blood. And I think she may be pissed that you and I shared such a wonderful kiss.”

“Let’s be logical, Jude. We have your blood dripping on the kitchen floor and a vampire at the window. And in 1958, we didn’t pee ourselves when we became angry. Why is this generation so infatuated with body activities, anyway? Nevermind, let’s invite Marylou Brombach to clean up the place while I drive you to the doctor.”

“What about your little clones?”

“They can babysit themselves. They’re twelve. Oh wait. I better tell them we’re going out and make sure they’re wearing their crucifixes. And I’ll pour holy water around the steps and window sills upstairs.”

“You have holy water?”

“I am Italian on my mother’s side, and I’m from 1958 so you tell me, new brother dearest.”

I followed Becky to the bottom of the stairs and watched as she ran up to speak to her other selves. I heard a crash in the kitchen and knew that Mom wouldn’t have to mop blood off the floor when she got home.

Before Becky returned, Marylou Bombach sauntered out of the kitchen wiping a bit of red liquid off her lips. She licked her finger. “This is going to be so much fun. First, I’ll kill your cheating body, Jude, and then I’ll kill your incestuous new sister. I not only get to kill her once, but 23 more times. What a night!”

More blood dripped from my arm as Marylou snarled and flew towards my wrist at the speed of a twinkle. 

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“That rapidly thumping thing in my chest melted into putty.”
Paul R. Lloyd
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Wednesday, May 29, 2013

How Do You Kiss a 71-Year-Old Teenager?

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Episode 2 of Jude Nerdworthy, Monster Fighter in Oh, No! My Girlfriend’s a Vampire.

Blood and broken glass decorated the Brombach’s front porch as I flew through Marylou Brombach’s living room window. My left arm bled in two places above the wrist. You may be wondering why I didn’t exit in the usual way through the front door, but trust me, when you’re girlfriend grows four-inch fangs, you take the quickest way out.

While I fully expected Marylou’s mom to be angry at me for making a mess, I didn’t bother to slow down as I raced for my dad’s Malibu. While unlocking the door, I glanced back at Marylou’s front porch. Marylou used her new eighteen-inch tongue to tickle a long shard of bloody glass that she slid between her fangs.

When she saw me checking her out, she waved with the fragment still in her hand. “I’ll stop by later, Jude, to help you clean up that cut on your arm.” She licked her four-inch incisors.

The only ones home when I arrived were Becky Stewart and her 23 clones. Becky was a sweet sixteen year old girl who was kidnapped by space aliens in 1958 and returned to earth two weeks later by the ship’s time. Meanwhile here on earth, decades had passed making her a 71-year-old teenager. She arrived with her clones who each appeared to be 12 years old.

Becky said Mom and Dad were out practicing driving their new car, a used full-sized bus.

Becky saw the blood on my arm right away. “Let me kiss you and make it better.”

“It’s a little bloody for kissing,” I replied.

“Not on the cut, silly, on your lips. Oh, your lip is cut, too.” Without waiting for my reply, Becky locked onto my lips.

I said, “Thanks. I didn’t know kissing a girl who is not your current girlfriend could be so nice.”

“Hmm, in 1958 we didn’t kiss with our tongues until after marriage, but it was nice.”

“Oops,” I said as I hid my tongue behind my teeth.

Never look out your kitchen window when making out with your new step sister, especially if your girlfriend is a vampire.

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“She missed my mouth, hit my cheek, and mushed her lips across my skin.”
Paul R. Lloyd
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Tuesday, May 28, 2013

Oh, No! My Girlfriend’s a Vampire

Episode 1 of Jude Nerdworthy, Monster Fighter in Oh, No! My Girlfriend’s a Vampire.

I should have seen it coming. The telltale signs included the fang marks on her very upper thigh just past third base, her new craving for raw meat, and the way she twinkled in the sunshine. But you know how love is. Once you’ve fallen, you miss the obvious. However, I didn’t miss the fangs. Or rather the fangs didn’t miss me.

Saturday night Marylou Brombach and I were on the couch in her living room. Her mom was chaperoning us from under the pickup in the garage at the back of the Brombach yard. The first few kisses were great, but that last one packed a double needle incision in my lower lip that made me pull back, squeal and check my lip for blood.

Marylou Brombach said, “Ooooh, how tasty you are this evening, Jude.”

I replied, “Hey, Marylou, how come you can drop your jaw about six inches more than humans normally do?”

“Didn’t you want a pierced lip? Metal on the lip is sexy, you know. All the kids are pierced these days, or haven’t you noticed.”

“Is that how come you have those four-inch needle-like incisors?”

“If you prefer to not have a piercing, Jude, pour Holy Water on your lip. I got a little carried away. Sorry about that. Oh, what the heck.”

Marylou Brombach, the love of my short, sixteen-year life, lurched for my throat, both fangs twinkling.

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“You have to kiss me for the answer."
Paul R. Lloyd
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Friday, May 10, 2013

Why Flying Saucers Visit Earth, Heh, Heh, Heh

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Episode 5 of Jude Nerdworthy, Monster Fighter, in It Came From Far Away

Rew-per had just said Iorg would tell us about our future. He continued, “Guud. I brang back little Becky Stewart. Sorry little late, but she okay. Only two wiiks for her. But half century, maybe mere for you. Too bad dat space travel screws up you time. Oh well, she home now. And bring back Iorg. Iorg happy now. Sell lots insurance. You need insurance. Dat’s why wi come to you. Save you lots money. Such deal. And look… Lots of little insurance sales people, little Iorgs, so now sell lots insurance. We come back next time to collect lots money. Pay claims for dead you. Buy lots insurance so we don’t worry about dead you. Otherwise maybe dead you. Never know.”

Rew-per returned to his ship after his little sales pitch. He flew off leaving his promise of returning ringing in our ears.

Once I lost site of the flying saucer in the sky, I noticed my neighbor Jim scanning his list of missing space alien kidnapped victims. “Here she is,” Jim said. “Becky Stewart kidnapped in nineteen fifty-eight from Provincetown, Massachusetts. Wow, Stewart isn’t an Italian name, but she sure looks a lot like Annette, doesn’t she? She’s probably Sicilian on her mother’s side.”

Iorg’s family was happy he returned. They expressed concern about all the little Iorgs and Beckys. Mrs. Baring said, “You two didn’t do something you weren’t supposed to, did you?”

Iorg laughed at his mom.

Becky Stewart’s jaw dropped. She placed a hand over her mouth. Her face turned crimson. “Mrs. Baring! My mother raised me properly. It’s not my fault the aliens poked, prodded and otherwise invaded my personal private places.” Her eyes lit up and her expression relaxed into a playful, flirtatious look. “Besides, Iorg’s like coolville for a future daddy-o, don’t you think?”

I asked my parents if it was okay to invite everyone in to straighten out what to do about the children and Becky. Iorg was easy. He was to go home with his parents. But Mr. Baring was concerned about the grocery bill for twenty-three additional, unplanned little Iorg’s.

Jim, my ever helpful neighbor, suggested Mr. Baring be happy he didn’t have to worry about diaper bills for twenty three new babies.

Becky Stewart seemed to take the news well that she had landed fifty-five years after her kidnapping. After everyone had left, except her twenty-three little charges, she looked around our kitchen with a puzzled look. “Where’s your phone? I want to call Mother. And don’t worry, I’ll call collect.”

I offered her my cell phone. As she screwed her face into a puzzled condition, I asked, “Do you know the area code for Provincetown?”

Becky took the phone in her hand. She studied it for a few seconds with her face shattering into hundreds of little puzzle pieces. She opened her mouth like she was about to say something, like maybe how her group had 70% fewer cavities with Crest, but nothing came out.

In a classic example of bad timing, Marylou Brombach elected that moment to call me. My phone vibrated in Becky’s palm.

“Area code?” Becky asked before she fainted.

The twenty-three little Beckys giggled.


"That rapidly thumping thing in my chest melted into putty."
Paul R. Lloyd
Steel Pennies

Thursday, May 9, 2013

Iorg Returns and Returns and Returns

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Episode 4 of Jude Nerdworthy, Monster Fighter, in It Came From Far Away

The space alien Rew-per kidnapped my friend Iorg Baring. As the local monster fighter here in Warrenville, Illinois, I was nothing less than frustrated. But after a date with Marylou Brombach, I felt much better. And so did Marylou or my name isn’t Jude Nerdworthy, monster fighter.

The other reason for my frustration was the flying saucer. My frustration lessoned when what the FBI labeled “a combination of swamp gas, fossil fuel fumes, fog and group hysteria” returned to the cul-de-sac where I live.

Rew-per’s standard fifties horror flick style saucer descended out of the sky at eight-fifteen. It dropped its four landing gears and planted four tires on the macadam street surface. The squeaky-sneaker, elevator-door-closing, high-pitched sound-person squeal combined noise resounded through the neighborhood as the door opened on the ship and the stairs lowered to the ground.

The flying saucer people had repainted the outside of the ship so that the writing was now in multi-colored English along the lines of a Timothy Botts calligraphy but with a slightly different message. I still didn’t understand most of it. It was either Rew-per’s notes from Economics class or an advertisement for retirement planning services.

Rew-per the alien came down the ladder followed by a young lady in a poodle skirt of the type last worn by Annette Funicello in nineteen fifty-eight. She was an attractive Italian-American teenager dressed for a fifties party.

Behind her came Iorg Baring dressed in a sixties business suit similar to ones the men in black wear, except Iorg’s was dark blue. Iorg carried a brief case. He wore a small felt hat on his head like the kind you would expect Jack Lemmon to wear in the film The Apartment.

Behind Iorg came twenty three little boys and twenty-three little girls. They appeared to be about ten years old, give or take a year or two. The boys looked like tiny Iorg Barings and the girls like mini Annettes. The boys wore suits like Iorg and the girls wore the same poodle skirt type of outfit as the teenage girl.

I kept thinking about the 1960 film Village of the Damned as they paraded by. To take my mind off Midwich, I focused instead on Stephen King’s Children of the Corn as the kids marched off the ship and onto my family’s driveway. This just goes to prove that a guy will do anything to avoid thinking about Regan from the The Exorcist. A girl with her head on backwards is just one of those turn-ons I discussed with Marylou Brombach, but she wasn’t interested in trying it because, as she said, “Isn’t that one of those things we should save for after the wedding?”

Rew-per smiled as the neighborhood gathered around his released captives. “Guud. Now, Iorg telling you about you new future. Heh, heh, heh.”

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Wednesday, May 8, 2013

Investigating Iorg

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Episode 3 of Jude Nerdworthy, Monster Fighter, in It Came From Far Away

Three days later Iorg Baring was still missing.

The police investigated. Chief Martin assured Iorg’s parents that their son would turn up sooner or later. “Boys come home when they’re hungry, Mrs. Baring. It’s the girls we have to worry about.”

My neighbor Jim investigated on the Internet. He made a list of everyone reported kidnapped by aliens but who never returned. There weren’t many names on the list. Apparently, most people kidnapped by aliens return to earth to tell their stories to the National Enquirer and other highly respected civilian alien investigation teams.

The FBI investigated. And I’m certain a few CIA agents joined them because they didn’t act like they were all on the same team. And the men in black showed up with their skinny lapel suits from the sixties.

The FBI announced that after careful analysis of the substance left behind on our cul-de-sac – which none of us ever saw – by the flying saucer, as well as weather conditions, particularly the high humidity pervasive at that time in the Chicago area – which no one remembered – that the flying saucer was actually a combination of swamp gas, fossil fuel fumes, fog and group hysteria.

In a separate announcement, The FBI said they would be investigating teen gang activities in Warrenville since the flying saucer episode was nothing more than a teenager’s prank. The announcement noted that a known teenage terrorist organization would be infiltrated and investigated for their alleged criminal conspiracy and prejudicial actions against undead and non-human persons. Naturally I assumed they meant me since everyone knows I’m a monster fighter, and let’s face it, monsters constitute most of the “undead and non-human persons” living in Warrenville. The rest of us are plain, simple old humans, plus we have some high school teachers.

In a third announcement, the FBI blamed the missing tires on juvenile delinquency and night tremors.

What do you expect from reports prepared by a committee consisting of at least three federal agencies, perhaps four or five agencies? We weren’t sure. For example, who exactly do those black suit guys report to? And why aren’t there any women in black?

The flying saucer returned on the fourth night. 

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"You have to kiss me for the answer."
Paul R. Lloyd
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Tuesday, May 7, 2013


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Episode 2 of Jude Nerdworthy, Monster Fighter, in It Came From Far Away

The space alien lifted Jim’s pickup and ripped off the tires. He threw them up the steps into his ship. He moved on to the Grimlachers' SUV and yanked their tires off. “Rew-per,” the creature said.

While the creature re-entered its ship, Iorg Baring stopped by my house. He’s in my grade at school. “Hey, what’s going on?” he asked.

“Not much,” Jim said.

“What’s with the saucer? Is Hollywood making a movie in your neighborhood?” Iorg asked.

“It appears to be the real thing,” I said. “An alien invader is scarfing our tires.”

We heard a loud metallic screech as four airplane-style landing gears descended to the ground. The big light under the saucer went out as the ship settled onto four tractor-size big tires. Rew-per descended from the ship. He pointed to the tire closest to my driveway, the shiny new one with no markings on it. “Guud,” he said.

His smile, if that was what it was, went from ear-to-ear, assuming those protrusions were ears. He looked like a mound of warts so it was hard to distinguish his external organs. He wore a grey, metallic suit. He had the same number of appendages as humans including two arms and two legs, if that’s in fact what they were. His head was a huge mountain of warts. A thicker forest of warts described the top of his head in the place that equates to where we keep most of our hair.

Rew-per smiled at each of us until he came to my friend Iorg. Poor Iorg became like one of those Star Trek landing party team members, the ones you never saw before in any episode, the one you know is the guy who is about to die at the hands of the planet’s monster.

“Guud,” Rew-per said. He snagged poor Iorg in his wart-filled paw and dragged him into his flying saucer. The ship made one of those sci-fi movie sounds like when you squeeze an old sneaker to make a boink sound and mix it with the noise of an elevator door closing and add in a high-pitched squeal from the sound-effects person. The landing gears rose back into the belly of the craft as it lifted off the ground. The ship made a high-pitched squeak and vanished into the night sky.

“What about my tires?” Jim asked.

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"Her eyes were large, soft, wet and kind."
Paul R. Lloyd
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Monday, May 6, 2013

Jude Nerdworthy, Monster Fighter, in It Came From Far Away

Episode 1: The Flying Saucer That Invaded Warrenville

We live on the end of a cul-de-sac which explains why the flying saucer chose our street to land on. It descended out of the sky in exactly the way you would expect a movie director to shoot the scene. The ship was a good fifty feet across and filled the circle of blacktop at the end of the street. What do you do when a flying saucer blocks your driveway?

Jim next door joined me in my parent's driveway as the ship hovered about twenty feet off the ground. A soft, glowing light filled the area under the center of the saucer so that it appeared the light held up the weight of the ship.

The ship was a standard US Area 51 Class starship with a large globe-shaped center section with its equator surrounded by a circular wing. This is the same design you see in all those horror flicks from the nineteen fifties.

Unlike the scary film saucers, ours had an off-white color with a significant amount of writing on the outside. The calligraphy was applied using a variety of bright colored pigments, including red, blue, orange, green, purple and yellow. I should say “symbols” because it wasn’t like any writing I had ever seen. Whatever their message, the aliens were making it clear to all who could read it. Obviously it wasn’t intended for us here in Warrenville, Illinois.

The ship landed at nine-thirty on a Tuesday evening in early May. Brilliant stars filled the clear night sky. The moon was a thin sliver off to the east over Chicago. At ten-fifteen, the hatch dropped down. It was the stair-type similar to the one used in Forbidden Planet, not the ramp style used in the original version of The Day the Earth Stood Still.

A large creature, about double the size of Michael Rennie and a whole lot uglier than any monster Anne Francis ever had to face, sauntered down the steps. The creature made a noise, something like a burp, to either clear its throat or to say hello. I wasn’t sure which. The noise was followed by the release of a horrid gaseous odor not unlike the aroma you might experience by standing behind a herd of cows.

“Rew-per,” said the creature.

“Hi, Rew-per,” I replied. “Welcome to earth.” I pointed to my neighbor. “This is Jim, our leader.”

Jim hit me on the arm.

“Rew-per, rew-per,” the creature repeated.

“Ah, same first name and last name,” I said. “I’m Jude Nerdworthy, teenage monster fighter from earth. How can we help you?”

Despite every house on the cul-de-sac having a two-car garage, you’ll find a half-dozen cars parked on the street or in the driveways. Our new friend Rew-per pointed at one of the tires on Jim’s pickup. “Rew-per,” the creature repeated.

“I think he’s trying to tell us something,” Jim said.

“Yes, but what?” I asked.

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"When she opened her mouth, a horrible word sprung out."
Paul R. Lloyd
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